How storyboarding changed my (story's) life
I was going to write all about story boards---what you need, what pre-work to do, how to get the most out of a brainstorming session, how much I love them, etc, etc. The problem? The "etc, etc" part. Hey, I know my flaws. I'm long-winded enough on a good day. There's no way I can smush everything I want to say about story boards into a single blog post. So, to make sure I wrap this up eventually: What are my top 3 favorite things about seeing the story visually? Funny you should ask. =)
1) CLARIFICATION OF PLOT THREADS
All concerns about which subplot gets which color sticky note aside, the very act of story boarding forces me to decide what my story's really about, and to assign 4-6 broad categories. For example, when I storyboarded Hi-Jinxed, (for the second time...let us not discuss the first attempt,) my plot threads were something like:
* Daisy's IC re: Trevor
* Trevor's IC re: Daisy
* Villain's Shenanigans
* Fight for Tenure
* Wands/Wings/Science
I was able to visually tell where each thread began and ended, and to see whether they were more or less evenly distributed across the acts, and to see which scenes were doing double-duty, which could be combined, and which could be moved earlier or later for better effect.
2) DON'T FORGET THE SMALL STUFF
A story board is also a fabtastic place to leave tiny sticky notes reminding you of stuff you thought was brilliant at the time, but somehow disappeared for the middle 200 pages. A particular character (evil stepfather, pegasus next door, a dog) or a quirk/prop (lists, glasses, a stutter) or anything else that isn't a particular plot point, but yet something you don't want to lose sight of. (I know I'm not the only Maven whose pre-storyboard WIP first drafts had randomly disappearing/reappearing characters or props.)
3) PLAY FAIR WITH THE READER
When I did the storyboard for Touched, (arguably a mystery) I was very conscious about which clues I dropped where, and who knew what when. A story board is killer for tracking stuff like that. What I mean by playing fair with the reader is that I make sure the reader has all the same information the protagonists do and that I don't go into the villain's POV (like I might with a suspense) because, duh, the POV person knows whether they killed a houseguest or not, so there wouldn't be any mystery for the reader to solve.
This past weekend at the Maven retreat, when I was plotting my upcoming YA, I was trying to decide whether to go with single POV or multiple POV. I had only storyboarded a few squares when the answer leaped out at me. No way could I do two POVs. One of the characters walks on-screen already knowing all the information the other character will spend a big portion of the book discovering. It wouldn't be fair of me to do his POV and have him consistently keep vague secrets from the reader, and it would also kill the mystery to have him explain the entire plot in the first scene.
YOUR TURN: Whether you're a pantser or a plotter or a plantser in the middle like me, sound off: 1) How do you weave your plot threads to best effect? 2) How do you keep track of all the small stuff? 3) How do you determine which and how many points of view to use in a story?




14 comments:
Storyboard, storyboard, and it hasn't come up yet because I'm writing historical and h/h shared POV is the way to go, IMO.
I'm loving the storyboard for the small stuff. Saves so much effort!!
Even though I have the storyboard done, I came up with a great idea today for a scene. I know where I'll put it because righ now it's just something happening at the orphanage. Now I know what they're doing there and it's wicked perfect. And all I have to do is add a sticky to that scene and voila, idea captured. Brilliant, I say!!!
Urrrrrrgh turrrkey brrraaaaain...
Darc: Yay! Can't wait to delve into the BATB in my Inbox!
Lace: O no! You've been turned into a Thanksgiving zombie! Quick--somebody find the Marquis of Moonlight!
Erica...
That picture has successfully made me run screaming from my office...
I could never..
How...
Too. Confusing. Brain. Exploding!
I have never tried storyboarding. I hear good things about that and the 'highlighter' method of plotting but have not tried that either.
You must have stock in Staples with all those sticknotes. Perhaps I will ask Santa for lots of Post 'Ems... Might be good to try for the latest historical barely plotted.
Jennifer
Hi Jennifer!
Sorry I made your head explode. =)
It's really not that confusing if you've got someone who can show you what's going on. It'd probably take a full week to do a blog workshop on it--maybe we can do that sometime. There's as many different ways to storyboard as there are writers, so just play around with it--you might find the perfect way to keep track of everything without boxing yourself in!
P.S.
What is the "highlighter" method?
I've cleaned up the grey matter on the PC... so all is good. ;) I think I will play around with it. The next hisorical involves a lot of facts to keep track up and tiny subplots...
The highlighter method is another way of plotting and finding problem areas. You print out a hard copy of your ms so you can see it better than on screen.
Choose a highlighter color to rep: hero, heroine, each secondary, major plot points, subplot, etc. Especially GMC's! Highlight each time you see something relating to those passages in your book. If one color dominates, you might have a problem with a sub-plot or secondary character. If you see only one color for your Goals and not enough for your conflict, again you may have an issue.
I think Lisa Gardner does this. I am not sure. I heard about it at the New England conference where she was keynote. Makes a mess of your book in hard copy, but allows you eyes to zoom in on colors instead of words to see problem areas.
Jennifer
Wow. That sounds sooo time consuming! And what would you do with passages that relate to more than one thread?
(Here is where I would angst about color even worse than Maven Carrie. Maybe if yellow was Thread A and blue was Thread B, and green was where they combined... *g)
In the past I've been a determined pantser, but things change when you're published. More plotting is necessary since editors like to know how things will turn out before the book is finished. I took a storyboarding class last week at Passionate Ink, and I'm just about ready for my first foray. It was great seeing a photo of your storyboard even though it does look a bit scary :-)
I keep all the small stuff in my head. It's usually quite reliable in spitting the details back out when I need them. It does get a bit crammed in there sometimes but I manage. ;)
Hi Shelley! I'm always amazed by people who can keep the small stuff stored in their heads. I'm way too ADD for that. =)
I'm a plantster, too. I plot ahead as I go (for instance, right now there's a sheet of plot points under my keyboard for the new WIP) and I pants the rest of the way. The small stuff, like Shelley, I juggle in my head. Whatever I drop gets caught on edit/revision, and whatever doesn't get caught I figure probably wasn't all that necessary anyway. =o)
Hi, B.E.! Plantsers unite! =)
I plot the overall story, and pants each individual scene, if that makes sense. That way the logic's all hammered out in advance (thank you, Mavens! *g) and I don't lose sight of where the story's headed. As for individual scenes, I might know one plot point or five plot points, but I don't plot out specific scene arcs in advance. I like to make stuff up too much. =)
I do know some authors who write 80-page outlines in advance... I can't even fathom it!
I'm with Jennifer - these pictures make my eyes bug out of my head! Don't get me wrong - I think it's admirable and amazing, but I don't think I could ever do it.
I start with a basic plot outline - key scenes, turning points, beginning and end. Connecting those dots is where the pantsing comes in. I do have little bits of scenes, dialogue, themes juggled in my head, and then sometimes I just start a "notes" file to jot them down. Paper notebooks work, too.
My big challenge is motivations. I always know what my characters should be doing, but I often don't know them well enough to understand why they're doing it until I'm mostly done with the book.
I suppose I'm a pantser though wouldn't like to use the term. (It sounds rude, and possibly illigial). Start with some characters and a scenario. Then work out what on earth to do with them all. If I've the slightest idea how it ends halfway through writing the first draft, I reckon I'm doing well. Though as all my endings are somewhere between sad and tragic, I know the general direction to drag the story.
Several POVs can be tricky and something I'm trying to work on. Though what's wrong with keeping 'vague secrets' from the readers? Have as many as you can, is my motto, and the vaguer the better. As the saying goes, treat 'em mean to keep 'em keen.
Erika,
I use a calendar to assist in my plotting. I print one out for the various months that my story will cover and I know the phases of the moon. If I need a dark night and it isn't a full moon, then it is cloud filled, foggy, or stormy.
I also keep track of all the various events and know whether or not it is on a Tuesday, Wednesday, Sunday, etc. My story is set in the Medieval period and they had different dietary rules depending on the day of the week. I know which were feast days and which were fast days and that is taken into account in my narrative.
I don't necessarily share the days of the week in the text, but I am cognizant of how it would impact my characters and also how far they could travel on horseback in a day's time.
At one point I realized that the timing of some of my subplots needed to be changed. I went back to my calendar and added color coded sticky notes. Different characters actions were reflected and I moved the plot points around like I would rearrange cards in my hand.
It was a difficult mental exercise at first, but shuffling the action around helped interweave the subplots in a more complex manner.
Intricate plotting is absolute key to a complex plot with a myriad of characters.
I will discover things about my characters as I am writing and it will add rich detail, but it absolutely has to fit into my calendar.
Linda
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